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November 15, 2009
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Thought I'd upload crops of my nightly progress on this piece.

Merc squad, some ex-elemetals.
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!RestfulSleeper Nov 24, 2009
Looking very good, love the close up on the helmet pretty convincing how you did the visor.
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*Shimmering-Sword Nov 24, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, visors are fun.
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!RestfulSleeper Nov 24, 2009
I'm sure the inside is even more fun, with all kinds of read outs, displays, and other doodads. Wonder if they get internet access, I'd watch the news in my down time.
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*Shimmering-Sword Nov 24, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
lol
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!loki909 Nov 24, 2009
looking goooood!
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*Shimmering-Sword Nov 24, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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~Tengus-Nose Nov 23, 2009  Student General Artist
Maybe its just me, but I think the torso is a little elongated in this one too... Its ok as long as the limbs are in proportion though.

I think the face needs a little lovin, to make it stand out. You could shorten the nose, and fix the lips... they're kinda puckered.
Or else you could use reference for that added realism.
Dunno if my crits are helpful or not, I tend to waffle :d
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*Shimmering-Sword Nov 23, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
No they're good help.
Is both the rear armor and the girls torsos long? I know the armor is terrible (though I have a way to pass it off so no fix :D ).
And yea I plan to get some more refs and fix up that face, havent touched it since the first pass.
Again, I always appreciate crits.
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~Tengus-Nose Nov 24, 2009  Student General Artist
Its just the girl really, since she's kinda lanky.
Looking forward to seeing this finished ;)
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~HellHoundx666 Nov 23, 2009  Student Interface Designer
This is looking really good man. I'm in love with your armor designs. I'd love to see more of the heavy gunner.
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